Comments on: A session on Writing

By: Scot Mesner

Scot Mesner — Tue, 20 Oct 2015 18:13:45 +0000

Hi, Hargun, Tox here
I really am impressed at the flow of your writing especially as you are so young. Please, >please< keep at it!
I understand about the cous-cous: the texture is unfamiliar and some people don't care for it. I however have come to like it very much. Keep trying new things: that is how a writer experiences life!
An editorial note: let your narrative flow and avoid-when you can-the word 'then'. If you allow the reader to assume the second sentence occurred after the first they will be drawn further in.
I look forward to reading more from you!
Scot Mesner

By: hargunsinghtikku

hargunsinghtikku — Tue, 06 Oct 2015 15:23:18 +0000

Thanks Kamalini Ma’am. Glad to see that you liked my blog.

By: lazychilly

lazychilly — Tue, 06 Oct 2015 12:08:53 +0000

Hey Hargun, i read every word you wrote with care, and i find that you have a seamless style of writing wherein you stick to facts and write with a charming simplicity. I love that about your writing style. Keep it up. The other thing i have noted repeatedly with you is that you take a lot of interest in whatever happens around you- that’s very sincere and will lead you well into the future, when you may wish to report stuff, or just stay in the moment. It’s absolutely wonderful to have that kind of ‘now’ feeling, It also means you are very sincere. Glad you enjoyed our company and what we had to offer in terms of guided writing. Keep it up, and we would love to have you again in our next workshop. Keep writing, keep smiling and do keep sending us your blog writings. Lots of love and luck from Kamalini aunty

By: manmeet

manmeet — Tue, 06 Oct 2015 08:11:11 +0000

Even my daughter could not explain with such details and simplicity.Great going Hargun! And such innocence…Gurpreet and Gurleen you must be proud parents:)

By: kiranchaturvedi

kiranchaturvedi — Mon, 05 Oct 2015 17:59:01 +0000

Awesome Mr. Editor !

By: hargunsinghtikku

hargunsinghtikku — Mon, 05 Oct 2015 16:57:34 +0000

Maam…. I have edited the Typos

By: kiranchaturvedi

kiranchaturvedi — Mon, 05 Oct 2015 16:55:01 +0000

Oops I see typos and spell errors in my comment- any way to correct them Hargun?

By: hargunsinghtikku

hargunsinghtikku — Mon, 05 Oct 2015 16:29:56 +0000

Dear Ma’am, I am glad that you liked this blog. It Means a lot to me.
And I didn’t not like Couscous because it was a new taste and I wasn’t familiar with it.
It would be an honour if you share this

By: kiranchaturvedi

kiranchaturvedi — Mon, 05 Oct 2015 10:53:33 +0000

Wow Hargun! This is really a great piece to read. The narrative flows smooth, and is so directly felt. I like your eye for detail , and the avoidance of all superfluous fluff in the writing. That is one of the things that makes the writing fresh and feel real. And of course, so very gratifying to know you loved the whole workshop experience Sorry the couscous was a let down for you, but glad the rest of the food passes your approval! Keep writing, keep sharing, and yes, we look forward to having you write with us again. Thanks for joining our event. And I hope it is alright to share this post on our FB group?

By: Nishant Jha

Nishant Jha — Sun, 04 Oct 2015 06:46:58 +0000

Great stuff Hargun! Loved the way you have described your experience in such simple words.

Keep learning and keep sharing…

Cheers,
Nishant